I sighed. "So, why'd you cut yourself?"
She was staring still, but I don't think she was listening. I snapped my fingers and she blinked, pulling back to reality. "Huh?"
"Marie, why did you cut yourself?" I tapped my foot impatiently.
"It's just something I do.." She lowered her arm finally, putting it on her lap. "How are you?"
"Did you do it to get my attention?"
The above is a small exerpt from chapter 23 of AI: "Castles Will Fall"
I re-read a few of my chapters and corrected a few small things that slipped through the first time. Hope it helps.
She was staring still, but I don't think she was listening. I snapped my fingers and she blinked, pulling back to reality. "Huh?"
"Marie, why did you cut yourself?" I tapped my foot impatiently.
"It's just something I do.." She lowered her arm finally, putting it on her lap. "How are you?"
"Did you do it to get my attention?"
The above is a small exerpt from chapter 23 of AI: "Castles Will Fall"
I re-read a few of my chapters and corrected a few small things that slipped through the first time. Hope it helps.